Nirvana In Fire

Chapter 147: Turbulence

Afterthoughts:

I started off this chapter feeling like it was a little bit of an anti-climax after all that battle build up. It all just came to a close too easily, so I felt the drama did a better job of it. However, the last part of the chapter had me choking in my throat. XJYs loneliness can never ever be properly portrayed on screen because these are thoughts that usually go on deep within a person. Pausing to knock at his best friends door pure instinct at heart level, even if his head hadnt yet registered it. Truly heartwrenching.

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